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This is MJ, Author Artist Analyzer, coming at you with another 10 minute writing session.

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This is from March 6, 2024.

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I actually went over long and wrote for about 12 minutes.

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I'm in the Grow Bug Tale Chapter 15, Part 9.

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This is my 9th writing session here, and this is what I wrote in that time.

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Wait for me!

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Hopper struggled to keep up.

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Cinderstripe stopped and turned back.

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Do you need me to wait for you?

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He just said that.

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Whoops, I gotta fix that.

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Slow down a bit.

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Hopper shambled along.

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I'll manage.

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If you say so.

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The Critterbot Tiger turned back and trotted on.

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He kept an even pace from his furry companion for a while.

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After a time, Hopper closed the distance by bounding after Cinderstrike with great hops

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until the orange pair moved at a decent clip.

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The Critterbot Tiger playfully pawed at Hopper, who managed to land a kick at the great beast's

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side.

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The two laughed and hoped for a spell until they spotted the other two Critterbot Guardians

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not far off.

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And that's as far as I got.

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So I like where this is going.

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I obviously need to fix that a little bit where Hopper says wait for me and then Cinderstripe

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asks do you need me to wait for you?

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And yeah, I still feel like this is very much Cinderstripe feeling out Hopper, seeing who

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he is, what he's like, by putting him through not a trial, but I mean he is being tried

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and tested and his character is being revealed through the conflict he's experiencing here,

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having a hard time walking.

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I don't know that Crickets actually have a hard time just walking around as opposed to,

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I don't think Crickets can run at all.

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I think their best modality is hopping.

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So I have him struggling to run after or trot after even Cinderstripe and then he gains

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on him by hopping and he can do it for a long time and that's part of why he's called Hopper.

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And the name's already been given to him, but it still feels good to establish why because

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I didn't really show his hopping.

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There was just the one hop that Gale Hoot saw and you know, remarked on in her way.

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And yeah, I feel pretty good about this.

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I just need to keep going.

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